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Original SubmissionJanuary 8, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-00775 Epidemiology and disease burden of sickle cell disease in France: a descriptive study based on a French nationwide claim database PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Leleu Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 2nd April 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Reviewer Comments to Author: I reviewed the manuscript entitled "Epidemiology and disease burden of sickle cell disease in France: a descriptive study based on a French nationwide claim database" The manuscript addresses an important epidemiological questions that may help in the care of patients with Sickle cell disease. Generally the manuscript is well written and of scientific merit Some minor revisions will improve the readability of the manuscript Pease enlighten me on the choice of two groups (G1) and (G2). I would expect you to pick count the patient in your prevalence study regardless of the number of visits(hospitalization) they have had in the National Health Insurance claim database. You could just pick any SCD patient who have had at least one hospitalization event. This would make the estimated prevalence a single number rather than the current report which give a range for group 1 and group 2. You would still need to state the limitation of using this method of estimation. I am interested to know how many records were excluded because of International Classification of Diseases (ICD-10) code D573 (which corresponds to sickle cell trait (SCT) in your dataset. Or other exclusion reasons. Page 6: The statement the "aim of the study was to describe SCD prevalence in France"; the word describe can be interchanged with estimate On page 7: The French longform for the abbreaviation (EGB) could be given along with the English description (permanent beneficiaries’ sample!) A little description how the health insurance the 5% not covered by the NHI is covered, would help the reader to understand the excluded population. Would the majority of these 5% be immigrants from Sub-Saharan Africa where the prevalence of SCD is much higher than France? The the first occurrence of the abbreviation ALD should include both the French and English equivalence on its first occurrence. Now ALD is defined in more than one place in the document. Do this check for other abbreviations as well. Page 8: The paragraph starting with "Hydroxyurea reimbursement included both Siklos® and Hydrea®" need to be checked for clarity! How was the data extraction process, were there patients that were excluded from the dataset because they database did not include (had blank) ICD-10? This would explain the data incompleteness and accuracy of the prevalence estimate from the database. Page 8 and 9:try to write the how the VOC was estimated in a narrative format rather than outline, do the same for other section that were outlined in bullet format Page 9: The statement "All inpatient stays between 2006 and 2016 for included SCD patients were obtained. Chronic and acute complication rates were estimated based on the diagnosis associated with each inpatient stay" is repeating as the duration of study was specified above this line. Page 9: Which algorithm was built to estimate inpatient and outpatient stays? how does it work? Page 9: The follow-up section is too brief or ectopic Page 9: Describe how matched non-SCD patients were selected. Page 9: Ethical consideration statement need clarity. What is the long form of IND? was a waiver for ethical clearance given by any Institutional Review Board? Page 10: in the statement "All analyses were performed with SAS 9.4 (SAS Institute)". What is SAS(? (include state and country) Page 11-13 (Results) please check clarity especially where brackets () are used. . Page 13: (Discussion) The second sentence can be shortened to report prevalence separate from age Page 14: Hydoxyurea cab be written starting with lower case letter. Compare your SCD, prevalence, VOC rate etc with other countries in Europe or global. Do French SCD patients experience less severe crises than other countries? Reference number 25 can be written in proper letter case like other references. Please correct Reviewer #2: Leleu H et al reported a cross-sectional study on prevalence of sickle cell disease (SCD) in France based on national insurance data from 2006 to 2011. The Authors intersected SCD population by ICD as well as reimbursement for hydroxyurea (HU). Leleu et al evaluated the rate of VOC indirectly by # of hospitalization, access to the ED, opioid reimbursement, transfusion. Using this approach, the Authors found a prevalence of SCD to higher than that expected. This highlights the increasing burden of the disease as well as the presence of sub-set of SCD patients possibly undertreated or with limited access to SCD comprehensive SCD centers. Major points • Method section is too long. Please move part of the description to supplementary methods. • Please add some more comments on HU • Please rewrite sentence on genotypes is too speculative • Figure legends need to be implemented. Minor • Please check the manuscript for typos. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Epidemiology and disease burden of sickle cell disease in France: a descriptive study based on a French nationwide claim database PONE-D-21-00775R1 Dear Dr. Henri Leleu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ambroise Wonkam, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-00775R1 Epidemiology and disease burden of sickle cell disease in France: a descriptive study based on a French nationwide claim database Dear Dr. Leleu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Ambroise Wonkam Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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