Peer Review History
Original SubmissionMay 18, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-14599 Improving outcomes for donation after circulatory death kidney transplantation: Science of the times. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lindeman, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Interesting and important registry study on DCD kidney transplantation in the Netherlands, a high volume DCD KTx country. Two time periods have been compared, with a significant improvement in outcomes over time, which is indeed novel data. Three expert reviewers have shown interest, but also recommended major revisions to the MS, and I agree with this assessment. They include concerns regarding methods, clarifications on data, the use of KDRI, the use of HMP, and discrepancies in the total numbers of DD transplants performed, along with additional queries. These will need to be addressed meticulously, and I am looking forward to your revised MS. Please ensure that your decision is justified on PLOS ONE’s publication criteria and not, for example, on novelty or perceived impact. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 24 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In general, this is an important and interesting topic: it has been notable that transplantation from DCD donors has been common in the Netherlands, and the early post-transplant results have been poor historically. This is a large cohort study that demonstrates how outcomes have improved. I found it very difficult to interpret the results for a few reasons: 1. How much data was missing? The authors describe imputing missing data points, but without some sense of the scale of the problem, it is impossible to comment on how appropriately this was done. 2. What variables were considered for inclusion in the multivariate models? What were actually included? What was the size of the effects of these variables? 3. I am unclear as to how KDRI was used. This includes both donor age (as the most important factor) and DCD/DBD status. How can you use KDRI to risk-adjust and then present data for DCD and DBD? Was there a double adjustment for donor age? (I may have mis-interpreted how it was used). Is KDRI appropriate for the local population? 4. The abstract contains no results. It would be helpful to have some numbers in the abstract. Reviewer #2: The manuscript contains a register analysis. The register is the mandatory kidney transplant registry of the Netherlands. Therefore, the data completeness is granted. The question is whether kidney transplantation after donation from brain death donor (DBD) or cardiac defined death donor (DCD) have a difference in early graft loss and in particularly whether there were changes over time. Two periods of time were compared 1998-2007 and 2008-2017 with a total of 10307 deceased donor transplants, see below. The question is relevant and clear. The observation number is sufficient. The result is that there is no longer a difference between DBD and DCD concerning early graft loss during the second time period. The clear-cut question gets an answer that is robust due to the large number of observations and rather simple and reliable statistics employed. The message is interesting information for people involved in kidney transplantation. In the discussion the authors speculate on possible factors causing this improvement. The cold ischemia time is one of the mentioned mechanisms. In the data table the mean values for cold ischemia time are given for both periods. To further explore whether cold ischemia is a critical factor a multivariate analysis including the available parameters such as time period, cold ischemia time, kidney donor risk index KDRI, time on dialysis etc. might help to shed more light on this question. A major critical point is the description of the observed transplantations. In the abstract 10307 deceased donor transplants between 1990 and 2018 were included. In material and methods section (line 90) it is 11415 deceased donor transplants between 1990 and 2018. However, the real observation periods were from 1/1998 to 12/2007 3499 transplants and from 1/2008 to 12/2017 3781 transplants, see table 1. This discrepancy between the total number of transplants has to be resolved. In the abstract the numbers should be limited to the cases evaluated for the presented analysis. Reviewer #3: the authors present a well-written analysis of post KT outcomes in the Netherlands. They compare DBD and DCD recipients in two sequential time cohorts and not a significant improvement in outcome especially for the DCD cohort. This is very interesting and has not previously been reported. I have the following comments. 1. The most significant difference is a nearly 5 hour reduction in cold ischemia time. I do think this is potentially a more important observation which I would recommend highlighting in the abstract, as well as somewhat more strongly in the discussion. 2. I would also like to know if there is any other technical change that occurred that could contribute to this-- like the type of preservation fluid in DCD, or use of heparin in DCD, or not using DCD donors who took more than a certain amount of time to expire (this is reflected in the first warm ischemia time which is slightly short in the recent time cohort-- was there an upper cut off instituted as a national standard?) 3. It is also not clear the use of kidney pumps-- I think this is what you mean by hypothermic machine perfusion (HMP) but I also know there is a practice for some European centers to pump the donor via ECMO, so could you clarify if kidneys are routinely place on pumps after organ recovery, and if so, did this really only start in 2016 and is it applied only for high KDRI or only for DCD. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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