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PONE-D-19-22634 Subspheroids in the lithic assemblage of Barranco León (Spain): recognizing the late Oldowan in Europe PLOS ONE Dear Mrs. Titton, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Though both reviewers felt that this paper had merit, both agree that the paper is thin on description and documentation in several key parts of the paper. The reviewers also point out a number of specific areas of improvement. It is also noted that the paper should be thoroughly read by a native English writer if it is to be resubmitted. I agree with their overall assessment and I hope that the paper is significantly bolstered and revised. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 18 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study presents some important findings on spheroids artifacts: it shows that these subspheroids were the product of a systematic management of rounded cobbles (line 829); polyhedron morphologies van be defined by higher variability in their angles, which are also more acute (783) and these morphologies in the BL lithic assemblage do not result from continuous battering (786). The conclusion states: In (the) future (846), it will be interesting to analyze larger samples of PSSB morphologies using the methodology presented here, in order to shed light on (the) hypothesis about whether such forms derive from the interest of obtaining a certain volume around a central point. Dispersion of the mass with respect to this point could indicate differences between the categories. However, why this hypothesis should be of importance is not fully discussed. The most effective solid projectile has a spherical form in which the most mass can be concentrated into the least dimension, so this hypothesis is assumed to include the probable use of these tools as projectiles. The mass of the tools is given in Table 2 is consistent with examples from the natural spheroids of the Cave of Hearths and which have been shown to be good throwing material in terms of impact energy and muscle power (Wilson et al 2016, Cannell 2002, Cannell 2018), with an average of 502 g – similar to the Cave of Hearths value of 533 g. Although the number of samples does not allow for a mass distribution analysis, it would be of interest to examine their mass, together with that of the 51 percussion tools (active and passive) and 249 pebbles and cobbles without anthropic traces. Indeed, given the close proximity of the Fuente Nueva site and similarity of the limestone cobbles (whole and broken) and cores, (which make up about 75% of the 446 macro objects- tools and possible manuports) of the combined assemblage (ref. 48), the mass distribution of the subspheroids in relation to the two assemblages could add greatly to our comprehension of these tools. This is of particular importance given the evidence for confrontation between hominins and large carnivores at Fuente Nueva, where an incomplete skeleton of Mammuthus meridionalis was found surrounded by 34 coprolites, 17 lithic artifacts, and 32 unmodified cobbles. The skewed spatial distribution of these elements, the physical characteristics of the coprolites, and the absence of the elephant limbs and cranium suggest that both hominins and hyenas scavenged the carcass of this megaherbivore, following a sequence of consumption in which the hominins arrived first, dismembered and transported the limbs, and probably also the cranium, and later the hyenas consumed the rest of the elephant carcass (Espigares et al., 2013). It would also be of interest to note that similar Olduwan spheroids have been found at Ain Hanech, Algeria (Early Pleistocene and dated at about 1.8 Ma) and Hummal, Syria (in deposits dated to at least 1 Ma). In the former case the classification of many rocks as spheroids has been disputed; originally described as “sphéroides à facettes” or faceted spheroids (Balout, 1955), a subsequent analysis suggested that “the bulk of the assemblage was comprised of simple cores,” (Sahnouni, Schick, & Toth, 1997, p. 703). The present work and results of the close examination of the angles used may help to clarify the cataloguing of this largest assemblage of spheroid material. At Hummal, two distinct mass distributions were found, one: «les gros, dont le diamètre est d’environ 8 cm pour un poids moyen de 540 g; les petits, d’un diamètre autour de 5,5 cm pour un poids moyen de 150 g.” The spheroids of Barranco are all in the former group, but there may be some samples that also fit this lighter mass, adding to the evidence of a single species selection with specific age or sex distributions. To give more context to the site, it would help to give the full coordinates and presumed height above the lake surface. Level D1 is said to materialize a high-energy, rapid water transport of gravels and cobbles (198) so presumably this flood level was still well above the lake surface and the site protected at the rear by the rock face (?), but with open approaches that would need defense. This is of importance as it would allow another level of comparison with other sites where spheroid-like artefacts have been found. Reference 109 is given as the source for examples at Ain Boucherit, Algeria, but it is surely worth mentioning the dating of the site of large polyhedrons at about 2.4 Ma, only 750 km distant from Barranco Léon, but separated by an immense time difference. Some specific points (highlighted in red): The naming of these tools should be constant and in the same case: Fig 2. Polyhedral and subspheroid morphotypes from the BL site (a-e), and 280 multidirectional cores selected for the diachritical analysis (f-g). 455 Tools listed A to F all present a polyhedron or subspheroidal morphology, Tools G and H are polyhedral cores From Fig. 2 and the diacritical analysis it appears that the cores are actually tools a and b (A and B) (?) 545 cortical surfaces, attributed to active percussion (Profile C and E). The use of this tool for (546) percussion in (is) posterior to the previous phases of management 561 temporal order within the management phase: 1) a knapping phase and 2) a pounding (562) phase (indicated in yellow and purple, respectively, Fig 11.). The figure uses the word ‘percussion’ rather than pounding, which implies hand-held striking. The marks on the rock’s angles could certainly be the result of several thrown impacts (training) and are unlike the (what appears to be) pounding marks in Fig. 10. The text states: (260) the limestone was used for different purposes; all mainly linked to percussive activities (261). A thrown rock is also percussive in that impact marks will show if it has been thrown and hit or landed on a hard surface. 721 Bisi and colleagues [100] found on the surface at Ca 'Belvedere de Monte Poggiolo (Ca’ Belvedere) 799 Sometimes the use of stone anvil attested (Fig 7)…. (Text missing ??) 802 innovation [188]. This justifies some DOB sites being reaassigned Acheulian de la Torre 803 [137]. (to the as stated by?) The clipped document has the colour highlights Reviewer #2: The paper presents a new addition on the lithic assemblage from a well-known European Mode 1 site, Barranco Leon. Specifically, it focuses on a small subspheroid assemblage made on limestone that has been analyzed through a four-phase technological perspective. I was excited for reviewing this paper, but after finished I’m left with the feeling that more could have been done. Although the general presentation is correct, I've some inconsistencies and a remarkable scarcity on some of the paper sections, especially on the one related to the Morphometric analysis, which to me should have been the biggest asset of the paper. Therefore I recommend this paper to go through major revisions. I also strongly recommend a general English revision of the manuscript. Maybe the authors can ask an English native colleague to review it for them. In addition, here is a list of some of the writing mistakes I was able to find during my revision: Lin.156: “we was apply” Lin. 268: “to remedy to the difficulties” Lin. 176: “edorrheic” Lin. 773: “be may” Lin. 447: “visibles” Lin. 613: “anges” Lin.799: “Sometimes the use of stone anvil attested” Lin. 835: “recongnized” INTRODUCTION Lin. 67: “… has been tentatively attributed to Kenyapithecus…” I’ve never seen the word Kenyapithecus published anywhere. Kenyanthropus platyopts is the name given to the species in its original paper and it’s also how appear in the several publications that mention it. To mention a couple: Leakey, M. G., Spoor, F., Brown, F. H., Gathogo, P. N., Kiarie, C., Leakey, L. N., & McDougall, I. (2001). New hominin genus from eastern Africa shows diverse middle Pliocene lineages. Nature, 410(6827), 433. Spoor, F., Leakey, M. G., & O'Higgins, P. (2016). Middle Pliocene hominin diversity: Australopithecus deyiremeda and Kenyanthropus platyops. Philosophical Transactions of the Royal Society B: Biological Sciences, 371(1698), 20150231. Lin 78-79: “… generating a process of distinction from other primates, underlined by the development of technical skills.” It’s probably due to the way this sentence is written, but it looks that the authors are suggesting the mentioned process of distinction is somehow a conscious one. Furthermore, enough evidences of technology in chimpanzee contexts have been provided, so I would try to be careful with this kind of statements. Lin. 87-91: “… Through time, the transition towards new reduction systems occurred within the OIC [28], progressively moving beyond the mechanics of the unifacial and unidirectional strategies, and leading to greater morpho-technological variability within some of the Oldowan tool kits, with orthogonal, unifacial discoid and multidirectional core management strategies…” This statement is something to take into consideration. Is the suggested transition a real transition? Advanced Oldowan reduction strategies can be found in OGS-7, Lokalalei 2C and Kanjera South, to mention some, and all those sites predate 2.0 Ma. The Oldowan manifests a large regional variability in its complexity, both synchronic and diachronic, so I find risky, to say the least, the suggestion of a lineal progressive evolution. It doesn’t seem to be supported by the current state of the art. I know the authors have quoted this paper later on the text, but I find it essential in order to work through this paragraph. Stout, D., Semaw, S., Rogers, M. J., & Cauche, D. (2010). Technological variation in the earliest Oldowan from Gona, Afar, Ethiopia. Journal of Human Evolution, 58(6), 474-491. Lin. 118 – 121: “Based on these descriptions, the different categories comprising the PSSB can be distinguished from each other by direct observation in order to recognize deviances from the regular morphological-volumetric aspect of a sphere, developed around a central point (center of mass), which confers them a more or less rounded shape.” To me, that is just a way to recognize the inherent subjectivity of any non-quantitative lithic analysis. MATERIALS AND METHODS Lin. 258: “Cores are scarce and intensively reduced (3.1 % of the 1 562 pieces in flint)” How did the authors measure the reduction intensity of the cores? Which are the knapping strategies used? Do they correlate with the ones identified on the limestone assemblage? I feel like there is very few explanation regarding this topic, while a lot of information (maybe not that necessary) is provided on the general characteristics of the assemblage. I also get that is not exactly the point of this paper to present the core features, but they are the elements that could possibly be correlated with the following PSSB discussion. Lin. 265: “After reviewing the entire lithic collection, five limestone pieces…” The PSSB pieces sample is really small, five in total, a 0.2% of the whole lithic collection. I’m fully aware that there is nothing the authors can do about it; the sample is what it is, but they should be aware of the problem this sample poses if they intend to include the BL subspheroid assemblage into the large Oldowan discussion. Lin. 268-271: “To remedy to the difficulties relating to surface preservation of these five pieces and to recognize and verify their special features and assess the direction of their removal negatives, we decided to compare them with 2 of the best preserved multifacial multipolar cores (out of the 10 available in the collection)” I don’t fully understand why the authors did this. Establishing a comparison with multifacial multipolar cores implies that they thought about a relation between the two types of artifacts before the actual analysis of the PSSBs. If that is the case, I don’t understand why they limited the comparison to only two cores of the total assemblage, if taking all of them would have helped to enlarge the sample and obtain more reliable data. These also relates with my previous comment on why the authors didn’t provide with a larger explanation on the core’s features. RESULTS Lin.447-450: “For the pieces with visibles impact points (N=number of angle with impact point visible for each piece), we calculated the average of the knapping angles (kn.a): Tools D and E (134 °, N kn.a = 7 and 131 °, N kn.a = 8, respectively) showed more acute angles than for Tools F and G (121 °, N kn.a = 9 and 116 °, N kn.a = 4, respectively).” How can 134 and 131 degrees angles been more acute than 121 and 116 degrees angles? Lin. 451-453: “While the final morphologies of the tools occur as cuboid, polyhedral, polyhedral-rounded or rounded, the analysis of residual cortex indicates a priori anthropic selection of rounded cobbles” These statement necessarily implies that all the selected pieces are volumetrically reduced at the exact same stage, which they don’t know or at least haven’t explain anywhere on the paper. Lin. 459-460: “The diachritical analysis allowed us to reconstruct each phase of manufacture for four of the tools (Tools D, E, F, G) (Fig 7, Fig 8, Fig 9, and Fig 10)” It might only be a matter of semantics, but I find that saying “each phase” might be a little bit risky. As they didn’t evaluate the reduction stage of the pieces, and assuming that new flake removals tend to erase the previous ones, I think it would be more accurate to say that they recognized the last phases of the sequence, not each one of them. Lin. 467: “Tool D (Fig 7)…” I don’t really see how the yellow surface presented in Profile E correlate with the green one presented in profile B, so its sequential ordination seems unclear to me. Also, if a percussion platform is been created in Phase 1 (green), how the percussion platform for Phase 2 in Profile E appears to be the blue one (associated a Phase 3)? One possible explanation could be that the previous presence of Phase 1 removals were erased by the posterior Phase 3, but I cannot assure it just with pictures nor with the quality of the 3D scans. In any case, Figure 7 does not result very clear, and I recommend the authors to provide a more detailed explanation of the relationship between surfaces and Phases. Lin. 492: “Tool E (Fig 8)…” In Profile A, why aren’t the Phase 1 removals numbered? I don’t see any identification problem and I believe are the same ones marked on Profile F. Lin. 511: “Tool F (Fig 9)…” In general, not only on this tool, I think the graphic design on the diachritical schemes should be improved, as sometimes is leading to misinterpretations. For example, in Profile E, Phase 2b (dark yellow), the scar marked as 6* is clearly cutting into the one marked as 8*. Therefore, one would say that scar is posterior to 8* and not a previous one, when, judging by the actual photo and the authors explanation that is not the case. Lin. 643-645: “This characteristic of the second group gives the objects a more rounded shape than those of the first group, which, contrastingly, tends to present more angular and irregular profiles”. That is a little bit obvious, isn’t it? I really appreciate the intention of been thorough and pursue a quantitative approach with this paper, but the statement that a spherical volume has less acute angles than a polyhedron is hardly a result. In general terms, the morphometric analysis here presented looks a little bit scarce. These section of the paper is crucial to me and should be extended. DISCUSSION Lin. 709: “When the PSSB are accompanied by Acheulian elements in an assemblage, their cultural attribution is moved from Oldowan to Acheulian (Table 4)”. Well, of course. It is a set of artifacts displaying diachronic presence. What is the point of remarking the artificial nature of any taxonomic category? Especially when those categories doesn’t take in account actual technological features, complexity parameters or quantitative data, but presence/absence of recognizable tools. Lin. 718-719: “Contrastingly, in sites attributed to the Oldowan, PSSB are associated with percussive implements and there are no handaxes”. This is, again, an example of circular reasoning that doesn’t say anything about the actual PSSBs. Lin. 745-747: “The ability of hominins to pursue a recurrent strategy in the management of multifacial multipolar cores, as in the Orce subspherods described here, represents a step forward compared to the older assemblages in terms of cognitive advancement”. There are older chronologies with long, systematized knapping sequences (See again Lokalalei 2C or even Gona). I don’t really see the step forward if we are referring to a set of lithic artifacts largely heterogenic that doesn’t present clear attributes of a final morphology. I find difficult to refer “PSSB” as a morphotype. It is a term that widely refer to diversity, but the elements that comprise them are quite different. So far, I’ve not seen any attempt to explain why that variability appear on the archaeological record. Lin. 781-784: “We define polyhedron morphologies by higher variability in their angles (Fig 13), which are also more acute, likening them to the group of multifacial cores. Comparatively, truly subspheroid morphologies display more open facet angles and greater uniformity”. Again, this statement relates with my previous comment on subspheroids being more rounded than polyhedrons on the Results section. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-19-22634R1 Subspheroids in the lithic assemblage of Barranco León (Spain): recognizing the late Oldowan in Europe PLOS ONE Dear Mrs. Titton, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I appreciate the improvements made to the paper. I obtained the views of one of the original reviewers, and relatively minor issues arose in the Results and Discussion sections. I request that you assess these points, which seem to be reasonable. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jan 11 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have successfully resolved most of the issues highlighted in the previous revision. I really appreciate the effort made on the manuscript edition, and the Introduction, Context of BL, Materials and Methods sections are relatively clear to my view. I also consider very positive the inclusion of the Supporting Information File in the morphometric analysis. However, the Results section remains a little problematic to me. As I mentioned in the previous revision, the diacritical schemes presented are not as clear as they should be, and could easily be misinterpreted, probably due to the type of drawing. The authors have made minor changes in Figures 7 and 8, but I still feel that more effort could be made regarding the informative content and aesthetics of the Figures. There is no disagreement with the authors on the way the phases have been identified; just the way this information has been presented. I would also like to discuss a bit more the relationship between the subspheroid sample analysed and the multifacial cores. Furthermore, I suggest the authors to provide a deeper explanation about why they chose to compare the PSSBs in the first place. During the whole manuscript, the two multifacial multipolar cores have been considered as part of the PSSBs assemblage, or at least that is the impression I got, despite this paragraph included in the Materials and Methods section in which the authors say that are different things: “After reviewing the entire lithic collection, five limestone pieces (0.2 % of the whole 294 collection) were classified by their morphological characteristics and special technological features as attributable to the PSSB group as defined by Kleindienst [35], Leakey [13] and 296 more recently by Tixier & Roche [34]. To overcome the difficulties relating to surface preservation of these pieces and to recognize and verify their special features and assess the direction of their removal negatives, we decided to compare them with 2/10 of the multifacial multipolar cores. In fact, only these two cores presented surface conservation sufficient to realize a diacritical study (visible impact points and removal directions)”. I think this is a key point on the paper, specially taking in account that the diacritical schemes have been fully performed in 2 of the 5 subspheroids (D and E) and in the 2 multifacial multipolar cores (F and G). The recognition of the same management phases in artefacts that have been classified as different is worth detailed explanation and further comment. In the Discussion section, the authors comment: “the diachritic analysis has allowed us to evaluate that, at least for the BL site, sub-spheroid morphologies result from a well-reasoned, organized shaping process that sometimes involved the use of a stone anvil (Fig 7). Meanwhile, such preconceived morphological templates transposed onto stone are usually attributed to the Acheulian, concretized, for Isaac [191], by the presence of innovative handaxes and standardized tools with recurring morphologies”. Again, I suggest being careful with this kind of statements, and this is the reason: the diacritical analysis performed in Tools D and E show what appears to be a shaping phase, supporting the author’s statement. I cannot really value Tool C, as its diacritical scheme is partial. Also, I’m not including the results coming from Tools F and G as the previous paragraph strictly refers to “sub-spheroid morphologies” and, as I mentioned, the relation of the multifacial multipolar cores with the PPSBs remains a bit confusing to me. The other two PPSBs (Tools A and B) were discarded from the analysis due to a “high degree of alteration” (Lin. 504). In the end, from the initial 5 PPSBs and 2 cores included in the original sample, only two of them (Tools D and E) show evidence of shaping. Again, I am not disagreeing with the authors; I just want to clarify why I think that the general interpretation of these results has to be cautious. I think the original sample is limited and extrapolations made from two artefacts can be problematic. I do not consider the things I have pointed out as Major Revisions. There are very specific issues that are easily solvable. However, I consider necessary feedback in each one of them before seeing this paper successfully published. 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