Peer Review History
Original SubmissionOctober 7, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-30787 Heterogeneity of Multiple Sclerosis Lesions in Fast Diffusional Kurtosis Imaging PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Thaler, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to the comments raised by Reviewer 2, please also address the following: 1. The word “gender” is used in the manuscript, although “sex” is also used. Usually, “sex” (the biological designation) is meant. “Gender” is the social construct and is rarely relevant in neurologic disease. Please revise the text to use “sex” rather than “gender” throughout. 2. It is stated that the DKI acquisition is very quick and that the post-processing requires only a few seconds. However, this does not account for other aspects of the pre-processing (e.g. use of eddy, co-registration, etc.) As you have included exact timings for the acquisition and Matlab processing, please include timings for these other vital steps as well. 3. Is that Matlab code for the DKI processing being made publicly available as well? Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 08 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: DKI is taking a more prominent position in MR imaging since its inception nearly two decades ago. The manuscript is about very interesting and hot topic in the neuroscience area that I believe this approach will be helpful for future early diagnosis of especially MS and other neural disorders. In my opinion, this paper is worth to be published. Reviewer #2: Herein, the authors acquired a fast DKI sequence in patients with relapsing remitting multiple sclerosis, and found that lesions with different imaging characteristics on conventional sequences (FLAIR, T1w, contrast-enhanced T1w) demonstrated significant differences in mean kurtosis, which was not detected utilizing their DKI-derived mean diffusivity metric. The conclusions of the paper are that the fast DKI sequence could potentially be leveraged as a tool to further replace gadolinium-enhanced imaging. The merits of this paper are its easy to acquire sequence that is superior to conventional DWI/DTI-based methods, as well as the overall thorough methods used for image analysis. Although it is clear that further work (additional subjects) are needed to validate this strategy, it is nevertheless a worthwhile effort. 1. Rather unbalanced patient and control population – would be worth commenting on; did you test for normal distribution (i.e. Kolmogorov-Smirnov test)? Also, please comment on the uneven sex distribution between the MS and control groups. 2. In addition to dimethyl fumarate, were any MS patients on other MS medication (DMARDS)? Please comment. 3. With regards to your acquisition, did you consider utilizing your newer 1-9-9 compensated acquisition? It would be worth discussing why you opted for the 1-3-9 acquisition instead, as both are efficient acquisitions? 4. Did you obtain a reversed phase-encoding direction b0 image for topup correction? If not, please indicate this limitation. 5. In the methods section, what is “rice-floor adjustment” in your postprocessing step? 6. In the methods section 2.4, you are referring to four different areas of white matter damage (as many would also consider NAWM as you’ve listed). 7. When creating the NAWM mask, in subtracting out the CE-L, did you base it on the neuroradiologists’ segmented contrast enhancing masks, or the LST segmentations (which would be more encompassing of the lesion dimensions on FLAIR)? Please comment. 8. Is there a reason you did not specifically include the temporal lobe in your NAWM ROIs? 9. Is there a reason you did not calculate the lesion fractional anisotropy and instead opted to compare to MD? If this data is available, it would be reasonable to present it. 10. In the discussion section, I think you may be misrepresenting the performance of QSM “However, in a meta-analysis by Gupta et al. [7], only FA was a robust parameter to differentiate between enhancing and non-enhancing lesions in MS patients, implicating a need for additional imaging markers to evaluate white matter and lesional damage.“ The article itself stated that QSM had the best performance for discriminating between enhancing and non-enhancing lesions, albeit with limited data. 11. In the discussion section, as to why MK did not show difference between HC and NAWM, it could also be the result of specificity of the metric to pathologic changes within the NAWM (it does not discriminate between myelin loss and axonal loss) as well as potential uncharacterized differences between your subject groups compared to other studies. I would suggest bringing up these points in your discussion. 12. An important note is that enhancing lesions are not necessarily acute, as some older lesions can enhance as well (recurrent active demyelination). Please indicate if this was something you took into consideration in your analysis (reviewed multiple comparison studies to determine the actual approximate age of the lesions, particularly the enhancing ones). 13. It would be worthwhile to comment on alternative diffusion imaging schemes, such as NODDI, and SMT. See reference: Yu, F. et al. Imaging G-Ratio in Multiple Sclerosis Using High-Gradient Diffusion MRI and Macromolecular Tissue Volume. AJNR Am J Neuroradiol 40, 1871-1877, doi:10.3174/ajnr.A6283 (2019). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Heterogeneity of Multiple Sclerosis Lesions in Fast Diffusional Kurtosis Imaging PONE-D-20-30787R1 Dear Dr. Thaler, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Niels Bergsland Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have sufficiently addressed most of the questions posed by the reviewers. It would seem the intrinsic limitations of this as a study performed in the clinical study intrinsically limits flexibility. With that said, the authors provided a thoughtful review of the comments and critiques posed. A fast diffusion kurtosis protocol intrinsically has appeal over conventional DTI, and this well-written paper shows a potential quantitative application in multiple sclerosis. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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