Peer Review History
Original SubmissionSeptember 22, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-29848 Small-sided games: An umbrella review of systematic reviews and meta-analyses PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Clemente, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The referees did not demonstrate too much enthusiasm with this work but they found some merit. Therefore, I would like to give you the chance to perform substantail revisions before further consideration. However, please note that a second round does not mean that the manuscript would be finally considered for publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Hugo Sarmento gratefully acknowledge the support of a Spanish government subproject Integration ways between qualitative and quantitative data, multiple case development, and synthesis review as main axis for an innovative future in physical activity and sports research [PGC2018-098742-B-C31] (Ministerio de Economía y Competitividad, Programa Estatal de Generación de Conocimiento y Fortalecimiento Científico y Tecnológico del Sistema I+D+i), that is part of the coordinated project ‘New approach of research in physical activity 28 and sport from mixed methods perspective (NARPAS_MM) [SPGC201800X098742CV0]’. No other specific sources of funding were used to assist in the preparation of this article.] We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. 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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Journal: Plos One Manuscript ID: PONE-D-20-29848 Title: Small-sided games: An umbrella review of systematic reviews and meta-analyses Reviewer' Comments: In this manuscript, the authors conducted an umbrella review to summarize the evidence and qualify the methodological quality of SR and SRMA published on small-sided games in team ball sports. The manuscript is well written, easy to read but, in our opinion, provides only very few new findings on this area. Main concern: In the current study the authors need to explain clearly why there is a need to review SR and SRMA as these kinds of studies are already conducted based on relevant scientific questions... Clearly, the introduction must demonstrate what the current study may added to our knowledge in this area? The authors stated that it is still not clear how the applications of SSGs should be framed into structured, longer-term periods or what their long-term adaptations may be... In our opinion, to respond to these questions there is a need of original studies and not review of SR and SRMA... In the abstract, please rewrite the conclusion. Be more specific, what it can be concluded based on the results... Please provide the hypothesis at the end of the introduction. Check the reference 9 and 25, same authors... Reviewer #2: The overall idea of this umbrella review is interesting, and the topic is relevant. The methods seem appropriate, yet the inclusion criteria should be more clear and transparent to increase reproducibility. However, the results are poorly summarized and discussed. In the results, the authors are mostly counting up how many studies evaluated each one of the outcomes, but they do not (or very briefly) provide any information on what the studies found. The discussion repeats the same problem. A more in-depth discussion of the main results should be given. I have the feeling that there is a sentence missing between lines 90 and 91 explaining how/why is expected that the variations proposed by SSgs would elicit long-term "adaptations" and "enhance deep learning". Why, on a neurobiological basis, would they be different? "Finally, an external expert has been contacted in order to verify the final list of references included in this umbrella review in order to understand if there was any study that was not detected through our research." Who was this external expert? This action, for sure, will do no harm to the study. Still, there is also little addiction from having an "external expert" reviewing the included studies. There is no guarantee that the external expert also hasn't a limited/biased view of the field. This feeling is even stronger when we have no idea of who this expert is. Anyway, as it seems, the expert review has not resulted in the inclusion of any additional articles. The inclusion criteria should be more transparent and clarified. "did not include relevant data in SSGs and/or team ball sports;" What do you mean by "relevant data"? What were the included outcomes? This criteria is far away to be clear... educational? developmental? The authors should provide, explicitly, the outcomes considered for inclusion. Reviews including all study designs were potentially eligible? "The AMSTAR-2 it is a rating system that classifies all reviews' quality level into critically low, low, moderate and high. The system classifies 16 items. The quality of each eligible SR and SRMA was analyzed by two researchers (FMC and HS) independently." Not all readers are familiarized with the AMSTAR-2 tool. More details of the items should be given. The results are, in my view, not giving any meaningful information. Just saying how many studies evaluated each topic does not provide a concise, informative, or comprehensive notion of what we know in the topic. The authors should provide a straightforward interpretation of the findings, giving effect sizes (when presented by SR or SRMA) or synthesizing the main conclusions and giving directions of what was found when all the available literature is pooled together. Discussion follows the same issue. When discussing their findings, the authors are once again just saying what was done in the literature, and little attention was given to what was found, the meaning and limitations of the findings. The number of studies assessing each outcome ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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